Annotated model essay sample
- Original teaching question, thesis and argument map
- Complete free natural-evil response
- AO1/AO2 annotations and transferable essay moves
30 October 2026 digital edition · digital download
A Level Religious Studies Annotated Model Essays
Nine complete, independently written exemplars across all three papers.
A 43-page collection of original high-attainment essays showing how accurate AO1 supports sustained AO2 evaluation, paragraph-level judgement and a defensible conclusion.
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Built for high-attainment revision
- Three essays for Philosophy of Religion, three for Religion and Ethics, and three for Developments in Christian Thought.
- Visible AO1, AO2, structure and scholar-use annotations explaining what each move contributes.
- A clear thesis, three-stage argument plan and paragraph-level judgements for every question.
- Original educational writing produced independently of OCR mark schemes and candidate scripts.
- A complete free Problem of Evil exemplar available before purchase.
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The complete free natural-evil response with annotations.
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| Your revision | Free website | This £12.99 download |
|---|---|---|
| What you can read | One complete annotated Problem of Evil essay and public previews of the other essays. | 9 complete original essays across the three papers, with AO1/AO2 annotations, plans and paragraph judgements. |
| How you use it | Read the free exemplar online and test whether the commentary helps you. | Compare complete arguments, annotate the writer's decisions and use the plans to practise your own responses. |
| Format and access | Web pages, plus the free resources clearly labelled for download. | One PDF available here after Stripe verifies your one-off payment. No subscription. |
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Essay collection
Questions in the starter pack
- To what extent can cosmological reasoning establish the God of classical theism?Philosophy · public preview
- Assess whether natural suffering can have a defensible purpose.Philosophy · complete free exemplar
- Discuss whether falsifiability is the most useful test of meaning in religious statements.Philosophy · public preview
- Discuss whether an account of human purpose gives Natural Law a decisive advantage over rival ethical theories.Ethics · public preview
- Discuss whether quality of life is sufficient for judging the morality of euthanasia.Ethics · public preview
- To what extent can Kantian morality be understood entirely through duty?Ethics · public preview
- Critically assess Augustine's reading of the Fall as an explanation of human nature.Christian Thought · public preview
- To what extent does a claim to divinity explain the authority of Jesus?Christian Thought · public preview
- Critically assess whether Christian salvation should be understood exclusively through explicit faith in Christ.Christian Thought · public preview
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