Human feedback · OCR A Level Religious Studies

Written essay feedback

A human review of one practice essay, up to 1,500 words, for £35. Get AO1/AO2 comments, feedback on argument and structure, and three clear redraft priorities.

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Choose the work that matters

A focused review of your reasoning

Your enquiry can ask for attention to one area or discuss a wider review.

AO1

Explain precisely

Identify where an account of a scholar, concept or argument needs greater accuracy or a clearer explanation.

AO2

Develop a judgement

Discuss how objections, replies and comparisons contribute to an answer, rather than sit beside it.

Structure

Answer the question

Look at the thesis, paragraph sequence and conclusion, and where the response loses focus.

A clear next step

How it works

Describe the question and focus
Use the enquiry form below. Explain the topic and what you would like help with; keep the essay itself until the submission method is agreed.
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Wait for your enquiry to be accepted and receive the submission and payment instructions. The £35 pilot covers one essay of up to 1,500 words; any request outside that scope needs a separate agreement.
Receive feedback within 24 hours
After the agreed essay and payment are received, your human review is returned within 24 hours. Use the AO1/AO2 comments, argument and structure feedback, and three redraft priorities to develop your next draft.

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Before you enquire

What does the fee include?

The £35 pilot covers one practice essay of up to 1,500 words: written AO1/AO2 comments, feedback on argument and structure, and three redraft priorities. It includes one review of the submitted draft. A further draft, tutoring session or longer response is separate. Feedback is returned within 24 hours once the accepted essay and payment are received; no clock starts from the enquiry alone.

Should I send my essay now?

Use this form for the question and your goals only. Wait until the scope and submission method are agreed before sending a practice response. Remove personal information from the essay.

Can I use the free resources first?

Yes. The 40-mark essay checklist and annotated examples can help you identify the particular difficulty you want to discuss.